Friday, June 29, 2018

my newspaper report

 Hey, my class has been working on something called a  newspaper report. And I am posting to ask for your feedback on what I can change and I work on. And what I can improve on it would be quite handy and useful so I can post more thing and they will be a lot better.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Corbin My name is sam and I am from Waikowhai Primary School an we have just found out about a literacy tumble that we will be doing for the next few weeks.
    Our first task is to do a blog comment and your the lucky one!
    This is real cool to see this I think it would be a really fun job to be a news reporter and be the one to share the latest trends.
    Are the Golden State Warriors your favorite team?
    Maybe next time use a font that is easier to read.
    If you would like to see my blog go to
    Bye now!


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